I hate to break it to this underage kid but their fan character is a bleeding heart mary sue. Whether they like it or not. Just because she has the ability to be killed doesn’t make her good. Being able to use magic while she’s hurt/injured is a red flag for being a mary sue. Hell even Natsu couldn’t do magic when hurt/injured/spent after a fight. You have to have limits. Fucking Christ.
Normally I don’t post pony shit on here unless it’s to do with TLK.. This thing.. I dunno what it is.. claims to be friends with the entire cast of TLK and then some.. like holy hell could it not be any more obvious of a mary sue?
In order to make a good OC, it has to be simple, sensible, and not over powered. This thing is burnt to a cinder.
They don’t care if this beast is a god mod/Mary Sue apparently despite the fact that people hate characters like this.
Oh okay, so we’re suppose to magically abide by your copyrights when you blatantly traced screenshots from The Lion King for your mary sue self insert

Oh look, another mary sue hyena from the horny Shenzi fangirl. This one’s suppose to be Ed’s girlfran.
Yea, ViTAWny isn’t really the best name for a fan character. It sounds exactly like Vitani. The design isn’t all that original either. “looks exactly like Shenzi but with hair extensions!” Yea..





